Story: Pastime
Conflicts
Internal conflicts
• Mr Lee and himself ( he thought that Tai Poh has stop telling the story but he just keep quite to himself, pg 215)i
• The man in the Tai Poh’s story that the man do nit have the courage to go to the woman ( the man finds it difficult to go to the woman and ask the question that he wants to know, pg 216)
External conflicts
• Mr Lee and Tai Poh ( they were telling each other stories and suddenly Mr Lee asked if they were still friends, pg 217)
Climax When Mr Lee tell Tai Poh the second story( pg 218)
Resolution Complete resolution
Mr Lee finishes his story as they reaches the last station line (pg 220)
Characters
Tai Poh
• He is old( he said that old man like him do not do much, pg 212)
• He is a storyteller ( he made up stories about a lot of things, pg 212)
• He is considerate ( he did not disturb or talk to other passenger, pg 212)
Mr Lee
• He is a good listener (he listen to Tai Poh’s story attentively, pg 213)
• He is sarcastic ( he suddenly ask Tai Poh if they were still friend, pg 217)
The most interesting segment is when Tai Poh suddenly stopped telling Mr Lee the story and saw the fat pink scar on the back of Tai Poh’s on the back of his head, near the middle. It is visible through his white hair. Tai Poh suddenly bent his head down while he is talking to Mr Lee.
Internal conflicts
• Mr Lee and himself ( he thought that Tai Poh has stop telling the story but he just keep quite to himself, pg 215)i
• The man in the Tai Poh’s story that the man do nit have the courage to go to the woman ( the man finds it difficult to go to the woman and ask the question that he wants to know, pg 216)
External conflicts
• Mr Lee and Tai Poh ( they were telling each other stories and suddenly Mr Lee asked if they were still friends, pg 217)
Climax When Mr Lee tell Tai Poh the second story( pg 218)
Resolution Complete resolution
Mr Lee finishes his story as they reaches the last station line (pg 220)
Characters
Tai Poh
• He is old( he said that old man like him do not do much, pg 212)
• He is a storyteller ( he made up stories about a lot of things, pg 212)
• He is considerate ( he did not disturb or talk to other passenger, pg 212)
Mr Lee
• He is a good listener (he listen to Tai Poh’s story attentively, pg 213)
• He is sarcastic ( he suddenly ask Tai Poh if they were still friend, pg 217)
The most interesting segment is when Tai Poh suddenly stopped telling Mr Lee the story and saw the fat pink scar on the back of Tai Poh’s on the back of his head, near the middle. It is visible through his white hair. Tai Poh suddenly bent his head down while he is talking to Mr Lee.

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From Zul
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